Your name

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I call and call into the void

A name peculiar to my ears,

A word they say I should avoid

But that chases away my fears.

I shout and shout into a sea

Of thousands of bright stars and moons

Hoping someone will hear this plea,

Hoping for them to reply soon,

Sadly my voice echoes against

A wall of emerald and silver

– Strong standing rocks, trees that shiver –

And my answer, I have long sensed,

Shall not return to put to rest

The aching of my wounded soul

For in this infinite forest

None can keep long their feelings whole.

I call and call as the days part

A name familiar to my lips,

A word that has come to eclipse

Even the bright Sun in my heart.

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Concept #3 – The Guardian

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Beautiful art by Algoinde


Prompts & Concepts

Context: supernatural/suspense story set in a universe with magic maybe – MC = Main character


MC was imprisoned for years (centuries? immortal?) in some sort of dungeon or labyrinth (in a desert? somewhere very isolated and long forgotten) with something they were supposed to guard. MC is released one day without knowing how, why or by whom, doesn’t know how long it has been at first and doesn’t understand what is going on. The object MC was guarding (or person? or concept? magic?) has been stolen? And MC has been set free to go and retrieve it?

Or someone tried to steal the object and failed because it was hidden too well, with MC and so they left “leaving the door open” for MC to leave. One day he realizes he is not ‘bound’ to that place anymore (the spell has been broken?) and he decides to leave.

The object (or person or concept) he is guarding could be anything (a powerful gem that is actually a person, some knowledge that only he knows about and that the world must never learn but he doesn’t know that he knows nor that the world must not know, or an object that must not be stolen [and that perhaps has not been there for a long time or has never been there]).

The whole point of the story is the search for an explanation as to why they were imprisoned like that and also the quest to find the thief and get back the object or protect it from the thieves.

MC was a completely normal person at first but became something else after having been imprisoned in that place for no real reason (was chosen? against their will? their choice? –> no clear recollection): immortal (each time MC is wounded or dies, their wounds slowly (or quickly?) turn into ashes and disappear, leaving them fully healed), amnesic (doesn’t know why they were imprisoned) and intelligent/wise (centuries old, lots of experience because lots of time to read, learn and experiment) but no practical experience in the real world.

As MC travels the world, they try to find out what was stolen and who stole it. Then, progressively they begin to question why they were imprisoned/chosen as guardian, why they were prisoner/what they were guarding and who did that to them. It’s a little fuzzy because of the time spent in the dungeon/temple/prison. They also try to understand why they are sort of immortal, what has happened to them?

The first part of the story would be the quest to protect/retrieve the object but it would slowly begin to be about himself and what his existence means as it progresses on. Perhaps the beginning of a series of books/stories about this character? The whole mystery of MC being either the guardian or the prisoner or both must remain until late in the story, it’s one of the central parts of the plot. The whole psychological part of doubt MC has inside themselves could be very interesting.


Well here you go, another concept I have had in mind for a while now. I don’t really know where it could lead because it seems fuzzy and not well designed for the moment (and I apologize if it was explained in such a way, I couldn’t really come up with a clear explanation) but I hope you will be at least a little inspires by it.

Feel free to enjoy this gift as you want and to do whatever you feel like doing with it!

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Book of sins

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There’s a leather-bound book somewhere in this world or the next

Where in gracious letters of dark red blood or gleaming gold

Are written all the things I’ve done since the day I was born

All the sins I have committed and all the oaths betrayed,

And there, on the final page, as the end is being drawn

Lies in a single word my fate, so dark and so painful.

I am no saint, ’tis the truth, and never have I been hexed,

I am no brave white knight like those in the stories of old,

Nothing but pure evil, monster full of hate, full of scorn!

My destiny was accursed for from the path I had strayed

Into the twisted old shadows long before my first dawn,

Never before had the world seen existence so baneful.

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Onwards

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Twilight has gone and dawn has come

Both in the sky and in my heart:

Time is not yet for us to part,

We shall be still gifted with some

Bright mornings together;

I feel my spirit lift off-ground,

Soar up into the atmosphere,

And the sun’s warm light melt my fear,

I truly hope the world around

Retains this nice weather.

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Pathetic fallacy. Or is it?

Sombre prédateur

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Le calme plane au dessus de ma tête

Attendant, cette cruelle et affamée bête

Soudain, avec une grande lenteur,

Voila ses crocs s’enfonçant dans ma chair, douleur !

Proie tentant faiblement de se débattre

Je compte chaque seconde : une, deux, trois, quatre,

Et ma vision s’efface dans le noir

De l’ennui insidieux dont ma vie est miroir.

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Lyrics

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You had it all: power, money, fame, oh… and love,

You were perfect, so pure and of us all, above

But when night came and it was time to go to bed

Your body froze, your heart came to a stop and fled.

What was it you could not bear? What dark memories,

So twisted they came haunting your night reveries?

Your soul was strong, always firmly stuck to the ground,

When did you lose yourself in this flurry of sound…?

Oh why did I not see? Did I not read the sign?

You had it all: power and love, both theirs and mine.

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King – Lauren Aquilina

L’évadation

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L’horizon à mes pieds

Ne m’entoure ni me sied,

Ma soif de liberté

Ne peut être sustentée,

À qui la voit grandir

Et, par la force, brandir

Mes espoirs et mes peurs,

Par là chassant ma torpeur,

Ne me retenez point,

Que mon esprit vole loin !

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A l’heure

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A l’heure où les fleurs fanent

Sur la tombe dorée

Et où les esprits glanent

Les bribes colorées

De souvenirs passés,

Ces corps vivants lassés

Qui marchent à pas lourds

Sur des chemins étroits

Et vivent à rebours

Le temps qu’on leur octroi,

Ne voient l’étincelante

Beauté de la galante

Dame qu’est la nature,

Reine de toute vie,

De toutes leurs envies

D’amour et d’aventure.

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The grand illusion

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Let us meet again when it is all said and done

Under the lush pine tree atop the grassy hill,

Leave quarrels to the past and in the wind be gone,

Let our new friendship grow as warms the morning chill.

My heart shall be lighter then, than it is today

For among my brothers many fell in the fray

And I can feel my soul haunted by this vision.

War is not the answer but a grand illusion.

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Daily Prompt: Mystical

The god of the well


He looked back up at the woman dressed in a deep-violet-colored robe, unsure if he had heard well.

“You must undress before you enter the water”, she repeated with a flat voice.

A light breeze was flowing making the thin cloth flutter around her body and her short raven-colored hair ripple in waves. Her emerald eyes however were fixed on him and did not waver, he felt that she was somehow peering directly into his soul.

“The guardians of the lake will not be pleased to meet you if you are tainted with earthly possessions, one must enter pure of body to hope to have a chance to communicate with them”, she added .

Her voice echoed around them against the stone and mud walls, reverberating infinitely in his ears. He knew she was serious but he couldn’t help being a tad unwilling to comply. Being naked in front of her was the least of the reasons he could think of: the air was cold, he could see the small clouds of steam coming out of his mouth each time he breathed, and he was sure the water would be even colder. What really bothered him however was the idea of leaving his equipment behind, he knew enough to not blindly trust the sorceress nor the guardians and yet he had to do this without any means to defend himself in case something happened… He looked up at the sky, only partially visible even through the gigantic opening. The myriads of stars paled against the brightness of the Rift’s bluish glow that illuminated the aethers. The night was dark, as dark as it could have been. Apart from his breathing and the slight rustling of the clothes, everything was silent, even the water, as if nature around the lake had gone to sleep.

“You have to decide soon, traveller. The spirits will not be patient indefinitely…”

He turned to her once more, her pale face reflected the bluish gleam of the night, before setting his eyes on the dark body of water. It was even darker than the sky, barely reflecting the scar on its ink-black surface. Unmoving, its calm stillness not even disrupted by a single ripple, it seemed like black mirror made of onyx, darker than darkness itself, barely visible to the human eye as if it sucked in all the light around. He had never seen such a sight. He had never felt such a thing either. He could feel its cold presence emanating from the darkness and saturating the whole space. He knew he had to go in, not out of duty or necessity but, for once, out of curiosity. He had to. If he didn’t then he would never know… But if he did… The thought made him shiver. He felt like a butterfly flying towards a bright fire, blinded by the light and not realizing it would burn itself.

The stillness of the black body of liquid in front of him was eerie, but it wasn’t that or the freezing temperature that covered his skin with goosebumps. No. It was the things he had heard about it, about those who had tried such a thing before him. Tales of madness and death, crippling pain of unimaginable proportions and visions that would shatter more than one sane soul. Plus the look the robed woman was shooting at him wasn’t reassuring one bit. He took a quick glance at her once again, his dark gaze meeting her emerald one. Her face betrayed no emotion but he could have sworn he had seen the shadow of a smile flash through her eyes. Even the resemblance was eerie… But he couldn’t be thinking about that right now. He took in a deep breath and steeled his resolve.

He might have seemed calm in appearance but, as he began undressing himself, his heart was racing and his mind was in overdrive. What if something happened? Would he be able to react in time? Would he even know how to react? Slowly he took each and every piece of cloth on his body off. He felt his cheeks burn as he started undressing. The fresh breeze on his skin made him shiver. Finally, once he found himself in nothing but his underwear he looked at the sorceress again.

“You are on the right path, traveller…”, she commented with a smirk.

He sighed, knowing she was enjoying every bit of this, that she would not advert her gaze and that it was useless to try to cover himself for it would remain intently fixed on him. Finally he took the last piece of cloth off. Once it was done he felt completely vulnerable, more than he had ever felt in his life. And he couldn’t be sure it was because of what he was going to attempt… He took off the necklace around his neck and carefully places the silver pendant on the top of the pile of clothes. If he had been less worried he might have chuckled at the slightly ironic sight of the finely designed butterfly. He then turned towards the lake. He sighed once more before taking a tentative step towards the dark and completely still body of water, feeling her gaze on himself with every step.

As his bare foot touched the cold water it sent a unique ripple throughout its surface. The breeze got stronger as he began entering the water. He clenched his jaw and wondered what he would find on the other side, trying his best to take his mind of the freezing temperature. It took him an eternity to reach a waist-level depth but as soon as he did he felt an intense wave of magic hit him at full force. It surrounded him and grasped his body and mind like a vice. He tried to stop it, to resist, almost backing out of the lake, but found himself unable to keep control over his limbs, they wouldn’t respond to him anymore. He knew his will to be strong but against such a quick and powerful aggression, and having to face the freezing temperature of the lake, he had not been able to react in time.

He cursed himself for his carelessness, barely halfway in and he was already caught in a trap. He tried to free himself from this unknown power but it was as if he was an insect caught in a spider’s web, the more he resisted, the more he lost control. Slowly he felt himself be pulled towards the depth of the water by invisible but irresistible strings. He wanted to turn around, to yell at her for betraying him, he wanted to let his fury rage about but he was frustratingly unable to do anything except witness his own demise… As he was about to be completely submerged in the cold darkness, he heard the voice of the sorceress behind him.

“Now you must surrender everything you are to them, otherwise he will never see you… And so will your friends…”, she said with a wide smirk before turning around and slowly disappearing into the night.

That was the last thing he heard before the strings dragged him into the depths and the lake swallowed him whole. As the ripples faded away on its surface the breeze calmed down and everything became still again. It was as if nothing had ever happened, the only remainder of a human presence was the pile of clothes atop which was placed the silvery pendant, gleaming as it reflected the bluish light of the Rift.


Here is a scene I have had in mind for quite some time now and that I finally came around to write for this prompt.

I hope you enjoy it despite perhaps not getting everything.

via Daily Prompt: Mystical