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‘Tis a midnight dream
In which it would seem
I am loving you
More than you ever knew.
‘Tis a fantasy
Of just you and me
Dancing round and round
Oh together bound.
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‘Tis a midnight dream
In which it would seem
I am loving you
More than you may see.
‘Tis a fantasy
Oh just me and you
Dancing round and round,
We, forever bound.
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Here is something I was stuck with all evening…
I don’t really know if I’m quite satisfied with it. I felt really inspired writing that but I don’t know…
Anyways, I couldn’t decide which version I liked most, the first one had a verse that is one syllable too long which somehow doesn’t feel right but does at the same time.
And the second one I find slightly less poetic.
I don’t know. You decide. Enjoy! ;)