Rain is warm
and sweetly sour,
it has charm
and great power.
.
Four sentences of three words.
Short but efficient.
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Rain is warm
and sweetly sour,
it has charm
and great power.
.
Four sentences of three words.
Short but efficient.
Tales of Ore 
First, syllable count, word count, and rhyme? Hear the applause. Second, if the rain tastes sweetly sour … you probably shouldn’t be tasting it. It could be acidic or have pollution. You might want to avoid it.
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Very true.
Don not keep drinking strange-tasting rain kids!
Thnak you for the kind comment! ;)
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